literature

Gift for Dawn-Cove

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Opening:
(Early morning, the sun has just risen over the valley, and you can see the glimmer of the dew on the trees and grass. A young farm hand comes running to the farmer.)
Boy: Father, I saw something strange stirring within the hay! I think it’s a person, but I’m not sure if he’s alive or not…
Farmer: Come on boy, let’s go. Nobody trespasses on our farm!
(The farmer heads into the stables, and sees a young man asleep on the hay. He looks tired, and a bit hungry. The Farmer has some pity for the young man, and decides to wake him up and give him some breakfast. He nudges the man, who wakes up instantly.)
Wess: I-I’m sorry, I was just leaving.
Farmer: Wait, come back here young man!
(Wess is in a panic, and so he runs out of the stables. The farmer knows that he can’t keep pace with Wess, so he just goes back to his work.)
It's empty because I need your opinion, I need to make sure that I've got it right, since I need to make sure I've stepped into the characters correctly...

Don't worry, there is much more to come, just getting something out

Don't know of the category, but it's the storyboard thingy...you know what I'm talking about

And I used these characters with permission, so don't steal!
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dawn-cove's avatar
the farm hand coled be yunger and wess neads a reson to run. how about the farm had douces wes with the water becaus he wold se the farmer do that to drunken bums on his land and being a yung farm hand he dus not know the difrence betwin a drunk and some one sleaping. how dus that sond